For Everyone Who Says "Like" Too Much | The Odyssey Online
Start writing a post
Entertainment

For Everyone Who Says "Like" Too Much

if you so feel inclined to use very, like, said, really, etc. Try using these words in their place.

51
For Everyone Who Says "Like" Too Much
WordPress

Let's go back to grade school when you were first learning to write papers. Mine read something along the lines of "The cat went to the store. The cat bought milk. The cat was very busy. The cat said hi to the dog. The cat shared the milk with the dog. The end." We all have short sentences scribbled on paper that the first grade versions of ourselves would be very proud to claim. Now let's catch up to high school: you were learning how to write essays for college applications, personal statements and all that jazz for your future endeavors. I am sure you remember being told to use "where as" statements, to not end a sentence in a preposition, and to not use words such as very, like, said and many others. But still, it is easy to carelessly add these words to your writing which in turn can lower the quality of the content you have created. As Mark Twain would say "substitute 'damn' every time you're inclined to write 'very'; your edit will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be." Wise advice from such a remarkable writer. But if you so feel inclined to use very, like, said, really, etc., try using these words in their place.


Very.

Generally it seems in writing we place very in front of statements such as very fat, very fun, very excited, very mad and so on. Instead of saying "he was very scared," use the word terrified. Next time you are have the urge to use 'very' either use 'damn' to later delete it, or one of these words that are more descriptive and not so flat such as 'very'.

Furious, dazzling, scalding, soaked, silent, soaked, beautiful, solemn, quick, superb, fantastic, keen, etc.

There are list all over the Internet that have extensive list of words to substitute in place of very.

http://writerswrite.co.za/45-ways-to-avoid-using-the-word-very

Bad.

Instead of using the word bad try these on for size.

Foul, offensive, horrendous, horrid, terrible, sinister, ruinous, etc.

Find other options to sub for 'bad' here.

Like.

Personally I am terrible because I say 'like' a thousand times too many instead of inserting these words.

Similar, uniform, twin, equivalent, akin, identical, etc.

You do not want to end up sounding like this:

Said.

It is easy to fall into the pattern of using said after said after said. Instead, try these:

Exclaimed, cried, laughed, muttered, barked, giggled, sneered, etc.


Moral of the story, use descriptive words. Everyone will be better off.



Report this Content
This article has not been reviewed by Odyssey HQ and solely reflects the ideas and opinions of the creator.
Entertainment

Every Girl Needs To Listen To 'She Used To Be Mine' By Sara Bareilles

These powerful lyrics remind us how much good is inside each of us and that sometimes we are too blinded by our imperfections to see the other side of the coin, to see all of that good.

636709
Every Girl Needs To Listen To 'She Used To Be Mine' By Sara Bareilles

The song was sent to me late in the middle of the night. I was still awake enough to plug in my headphones and listen to it immediately. I always did this when my best friend sent me songs, never wasting a moment. She had sent a message with this one too, telling me it reminded her so much of both of us and what we have each been through in the past couple of months.

Keep Reading...Show less
Zodiac wheel with signs and symbols surrounding a central sun against a starry sky.

What's your sign? It's one of the first questions some of us are asked when approached by someone in a bar, at a party or even when having lunch with some of our friends. Astrology, for centuries, has been one of the largest phenomenons out there. There's a reason why many magazines and newspapers have a horoscope page, and there's also a reason why almost every bookstore or library has a section dedicated completely to astrology. Many of us could just be curious about why some of us act differently than others and whom we will get along with best, and others may just want to see if their sign does, in fact, match their personality.

Keep Reading...Show less
Entertainment

20 Song Lyrics To Put A Spring Into Your Instagram Captions

"On an island in the sun, We'll be playing and having fun"

530944
Person in front of neon musical instruments; glowing red and white lights.
Photo by Spencer Imbrock on Unsplash

Whenever I post a picture to Instagram, it takes me so long to come up with a caption. I want to be funny, clever, cute and direct all at the same time. It can be frustrating! So I just look for some online. I really like to find a song lyric that goes with my picture, I just feel like it gives the picture a certain vibe.

Here's a list of song lyrics that can go with any picture you want to post!

Keep Reading...Show less
Chalk drawing of scales weighing "good" and "bad" on a blackboard.
WP content

Being a good person does not depend on your religion or status in life, your race or skin color, political views or culture. It depends on how good you treat others.

We are all born to do something great. Whether that be to grow up and become a doctor and save the lives of thousands of people, run a marathon, win the Noble Peace Prize, or be the greatest mother or father for your own future children one day. Regardless, we are all born with a purpose. But in between birth and death lies a path that life paves for us; a path that we must fill with something that gives our lives meaning.

Keep Reading...Show less

Subscribe to Our Newsletter

Facebook Comments