Poetry On Odyssey: You Will Know You Are Falling In Love When...

Poetry On Odyssey: You Will Know You Are Falling In Love When...

Sometime during the night, a rush of nerves jolt you awake to a treasured sight.

I wrote this Islamic poem for my best friend's wedding last year. It's from the perspective of a newlywed couple falling in love through their prayers to Allah (swt) for a blessed marriage. All Islamic terms you may find unfamiliar are linked so readers can grasp the definition behind the word and its meaning in the poem instantly! Hope you enjoy and share with your loved ones.

You will know you are falling in love

when sometime during the night,

a rush of nerves jolt you awake to a treasured sight:

your husband's hands raised in dua

and your name spills from his lips

in a plea, "Oh, Allah, let there be barakah in this marriage."

And quite suddenly, a radiant spark will flare in your chest,

brightening the sky like a sunrise,

beaming rays through the prism of fleeting clouds,

burnishing a future so golden, even romantics fail to surmise

the gentle gesture with which he fastens a gift of jewels around your neck.

Your heart constricts with such gratitude

that ricochets in his glistening eyes

from which tears tumble down amid hard times.

You will find the strength to cradle his broken heart,

laid bare to dry under adoring sight.

Though your breath will catch amid fervent prayers

when thunderous storms sprawl across blackening skies,

hailing mercy from our maker: Al-Gafur, Al-Bari, Al-Muhyi.

When the pulse of life in your belly soon marks the birth of a new family,

a jubilant nest of children springing forth towards their destiny

till only an ache in your heart is left to linger

is when he will clasp your hand and count blessings on your fingers.

And quite suddenly, the flame in your chest is doused,

permeating the sky like a sunset,

prolonging light cast upon mourning grounds,

procuring an eternal life so blessed, even skeptics fail to reject

the twinkle of noor that awakes you to a treasured sight:

your husband's hands raised in dua,

and your name spills from his lips,

that is when you will know you have fallen in love.

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. All resemblance to actual people, places, incidents, or things is completely coincidental.

Cover Image Credit: Pexels

Popular Right Now

15 Stores That Have Free Gifts For You On Your Birthday, Yes, Even In Your 20s

Is it worth all of the free stuff? YES!

Do yourself a favor and go sign up for all of these rewards programs below. I know...you are thinking about all the emails you are going to receive..but is it worth all of the free stuff? YES!

1. Auntie Anne's

Sign up for pretzel perk (really easy), and you get a free pretzel on your birthday. Who doesn't love Auntie Anne's? Perfect snack while you are on your birthday shopping spree! Don't get me started on those cinnamon sugar covered pretzels!

2. Baskin Robbins

Go in and tell them it is your birthday, and you will receive a Free Ice Cream. Their Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough is THE best, but its impossible to order wrong at Baskin Robbins.

3. Cracker Barrel

Go in and tell them it is your birthday, and you will receive a Free Dessert. Look around in the store, play some chess just like old times, and it would be such a great, down to earth place to celebrate!

4. Kendra Scott

1/2 off on one item during your birthday month. All you need is your ID, and they will discount your item!


Free meal on your birthday! Pancakes here I come!

6. Krispy Kreme

Sign up for eclub, receive a free donut :) Easy enough! I mean who doesn't want to bite into that a warm, sweet, sticky donut?

7. Panera

Sign up for (free) Panera Rewards, and receive free dessert. Oh, that is after your mac and cheese...ofcourse.

8. P.F Changs

Create an account = Free Appetizer or Dessert during your birthday month (THANK YOU FOR NOT LIMITING IT TO THE ONE DAY)

9. Sephora

Register with Sephora and they will give you a free gift on your birthday.

10. Steak n' Shake

Sign up for E Club for a free menu item on your birthday.

11. Starbucks

Getting tired running around to recieve your free items? Stop by Starbucks with your reward (app) to get a free drink!

12. Columbia Sportswear

Get that jacket you've been waiting for to go on sale, because you receive a 20% off coupon if you sign up for their rewards club.

13. ULTA Beauty

Get a free gift once you sign up for their (free) rewards. While you are in there, might want to ask for a free makeover?

14. Einstein Bros Bagels

Get your free birthday breakfast on them if you join their EClub (Again very easy)

15. DSW

Recieve a $5 Gift Certificate if you join their rewards, which is super easy because they just send you emails which most of the time is coupons.

Cover Image Credit: breleee • Instagram

Related Content

Connect with a generation
of new voices.

We are students, thinkers, influencers, and communities sharing our ideas with the world. Join our platform to create and discover content that actually matters to you.

Learn more Start Creating

A Letter To My Muse

There is always someone who believes in you!


Dearest Muse, I don't think I've ever thanked you for all you have done for me. For as long as I could remember, storytelling was an interest of mine and if not for your faith in me, poetry readings would be the only way my voice was heard. The longer I wrote, the more I reminisced of the good ol' days of elementary school life filled with annoying "ABC order" assignments and vocabulary tests; which at the time were nothing more than an anchor; a mere waste of time. Though, as I reached 6th grade, I truly saw the beauty of life in kaleidoscope-like fashion; various complex topics and how words could express them all. These lessons proved worthwhile as they aided in reaching my current level of insight and helped the ensnared soul voice his thoughts--relating to all who listen. The longer I wrote, the more beauty there was to experience; growth filled every word possessed--I was creating something beautiful.

My point is this. I would have never thought of sharing a piece of me like this to the world; you took my hand and directed me through a gorgeous door filled with my very essence. A part of me that shows itself in every piece written, and a dauntless character that relishes pushing the envelope and challenging the conformist thinking encasing the world we live in. Furthermore, what has started as a medium solely for enjoyment was nurtured into something to vent through and truly grip the finer and important things in life.

Mario C.


I've had brilliant teachers within every niche, yet the one that sticks out more than most is you. Thank you for your faith, soul, and open-mindedness.

Cover Image Credit:

Igor Ovsyannykov

Related Content

Facebook Comments