To Those We Lost In The Parkland Shooting

To Those We Lost In The Parkland Shooting

The government needs to know that IT’s TIME to make a change to its old, outdated constitution

Although been about 60 days since the nerve-racking Stoneman Douglas High School shooting, I cannot stop thinking about it. It must have been such a heart-rending and woebegone moment for parents and families who have lost their loved ones. It was an incident that no one has ever dreamed about or thought off in their life. When I heard the news about this deadly shooting in Florida, I was so shocked. I couldn’t believe it. It was like having a nightmare with open eyes.

We all know that we need to solve this “gun control” issue ASAP. The government needs to know that IT’s TIME to make a change to its old, outdated constitution. Yes, I said "outdated" because the constitution was created about two hundred thirty years ago. The time and people of the nation have been changed, so it is essential to think about updating some parts of the Constitution. The Constitution was created to fulfill “Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness,” but it doesn’t appear to stand. If there exists a problem, there has to be a solution for it. Furthermore, this poetry would try its best to describe the feeling, nightmares, and thoughts of survivors and victims from the standpoint of the survivor of one of the most petrifying high school shooting in the history of the United States.

Before my hand reach for it, the alarm sounds its last ring,

Bright, luminous Sun was about to rise;

with a humongous smile on his face

Be lost in thought full of creativity,

hoping the History exam to be canceled,

With fifteen pounds of a backpack on my back,

riding my bike; I headed to the school

I was feeling bone-chilling, the Arctic-like wind on the face;

Had to pedal faster than everyday cause I was getting late

Somehow, I managed to land on my both feet;

As all the time, I celebrated the victory of landing sharp, on time

Jennifer and Mike were chatting in the hallway; I waved to them

Tony was running toward me, like a bull of wall street;

Looked like, he won the Mega Millions last night

He said: TJ, you and I got selected for the Varsity Basketball team.

High as a kite, my feelings and excitement were flying

Unstoppable, but both feet on the ground

One by one, classes were going effortlessly;

It was almost the time for the lunch, I was hangry

Heard We have nachos with queso sauce, and Cuban sandwich;

It was delicious lunch, it literally made my day

We were playing basketball in PE class;

Heard people screaming, asking for help

I ran outside in the hallway; I was afraid and nervous;

One guy shooting randomly with his machine gun;

My coach dragged me in, right away.

We were on lockdown; it was traumatic, shocking for all of us

We’re frightened by the sound of bullets;

My hands were reaching for the phone to call 911;

Something sinister about to happen called my Mom.

I was crying on the phone; must have been terrified, my Mom

I told her about the whole incident, didn’t know we would survive

Someone was smacking on the door, felt we are next;

It was pin drop silence; He walked away

Heard roaring noise of people screaming, in pain;

Police have arrived; shooting was kept going

Officers came into the Gym to escort us;

Everyone was crying and screaming, couldn’t believe we’re alive

Felt so miserable and upset after spotting dead people on the floor;

Once I get out of the building, my mom was standing outside

Fighting with the cops to let her in, I ran to her.

It was a lot worse than any nightmares that anyone ever had;

We lost our friends and teachers; it wasn’t their fault.

When officers and reporters were asking us questions;

I was speechless; couldn’t say anything for a couple of days

Kept having terrifying dreams, unseen; made me debilitate.

Had dreams, saving everyone's life if I have done this and that;

Unfortunately, regrettably; it’s too late, now

They were innocent; they deserve justice

Heard roaring noise saying: IT’S NEVER TOO LATE,


One may have a right to protect himself/herself in some life-threatening situation, BUT not to kill someone in any case. This issue can be resolved by improving gun control laws by the government with the support of citizens. For instance, rules and regulations could be more severe for those people who want to have guns on their hands. The government may set up a psychological check-up of every gun owner every month or every next two months to ensure they are psychologically healthy.

Also, the implementation of GPS tracking chips in guns may help to improve the safety of citizens. Instead of arming teachers, the government should increase the security of each school by installing surveillance cameras and metal detector sensors around a mile from the school. Alongside, furthermore, relevant solutions could be found and invent by experts in the public security department.

All in all, the salient purpose of this article and poem is not to oppose any political entities, but it is to suggest the government to TAKE ACTION on this matter right away. See you next week!

Cover Image Credit: Lorie Shaull / Flickr

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Stop Discourging Future Teachers

One day, you'll be thankful for us.

“What do you want to be when you grow up?" It seems like this is the question we heard from the time we were able to talk. Our answers started out as whatever movie or action figure was popular that year. I personally was going to be Cinderella and shoot spider webs out of my wrists at the same time. The next phase was spent choosing something that we read about in a book or saw in movies. We were aspiring to be actors, skydivers, and astronauts.

After we realized NASA may not necessarily be interested in every eager 10-year-old, we went through the unknown stage. This chapter of life can last a year or for some, forever. I personally did not have a long “unknown" stage. I knew I was going to be a teacher, more specifically I knew I wanted to do elementary or special education. I come from a family of educators, so it was no surprise that at all the Thanksgiving and Christmas functions I had actually figured it out. The excitement of knowing what to do with the rest of my life quickly grew and then began to dwindle just as fast.


"Well, looks like you'll be broke all your life."

“That's a lot of paperwork."

“If I could go back and do it again, I wouldn't choose this."

These are just a few replies I have received. The unfortunate part is that many of those responses were from teachers themselves. I get it, you want to warn and prepare us for the road we are about to go down. I understand the stress it can take because I have been around it. The countless hours of grading, preparing, shopping for the classroom, etc. all takes time. I can understand how it would get tiresome and seem redundant. The feeling a teacher has when the principal schedules yet another faculty meeting to talk an hour on what could've been stated in an email… the frustration they experience when a few students seem uncontrollable… the days they feel inadequate and unseen… the sadness they feel when they realize the student with no supplies comes from a broken home… I think it is safe to say that most teachers are some of the toughest, most compassionate and hardworking people in this world.

Someone has to be brave enough to sacrifice their time with their families to spend time with yours. They have to be willing to provide for the kids that go without and have a passion to spread knowledge to those who will one day be leading this country. This is the reason I encourage others to stop telling us not to go for it.

Stop saying we won't make money because we know. Stop saying we will regret it, because if we are making a difference, then we won't. Stop telling us we are wasting our time, when one day we will be touching hearts.

Tell us to be great, and then wish us good luck. Tell us that our passion to help and guide kids will not go unnoticed. Tell us that we are bold for trying, but do not tell us to change our minds.

Teachers light the path for doctors, police officers, firefighters, politicians, nurses, etc. Teachers are pillars of society. I think I speak for most of us when I say that we seek to change a life or two, so encourage us or sit back and watch us go for it anyways.

Cover Image Credit: Kathryn Huffman

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14 Honest College Things The Class Of 2023 Needs To Know ~Before~ Fall Semester

Sit down, be humble.


To The Class of 2023,

Before you start your college career, please know:

1. Nobody...and I mean nobody gives a shit about your AP Calculus scores.


" I got a 5 in Calc AB AND BC, a 5 in AP Literature, awh but I only got a 4 in AP Chem"

2. THE SAME GOES FOR YOUR SAT/ACT SCORES + nobody will know what you're talking about because they changed the test like 10 times since.


3. College 8 AMs are not the same as your 0 period orchestra class in 12th grade.


4. You're going to get rejected from a lot of clubs and that does not make you a failure.


5. If you do get into your clubs, make sure not to overwhelm or overcommit yourself.

visual representation of what it looks like when you join too many clubs


6. It's OK to realize that you don't want to be pre-med or you want to change majors.


7. There will ALWAYS ALWAYS be someone who's doing better than you at something but that doesn't mean you're behind.


8. "I'm a freshman but sophomore standin-" No, you don't have to clarify that, you'll sound like an asshole.


9. You may get your first ever B-, C+ or even D OR EVEN A W in your life. College is meant to teach you how to cope with failure.


10. Go beyond your comfort zone. Join a theatre club if you're afraid of public speaking. Join an animal rescue club if you're afraid of animals. College is learning more about yourself.


11. Scholarships do exist. APPLY APPLY APPLY.


12. Don't try to brag about all the stuff you did in high school, you'll just sound like a weenie hut jr. scout


13. Understand and be sensitive to the fact that everybody around you has a different experience and story of getting to university.


14. You're going to be exposed to people with different opinions and views, don't fight them. Instead, try to explain your perspective and listen to their reasoning as well.


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